Everything you need to know about writing a compelling college essay from a former admissions officer...
As an admissions officer at a top-tier state university, I read thousands of essays from brilliant students. What did I find? Those straight-A, National Merit scholar students did not know how to write compelling application essays. Sure, they could write a paragraph. Their thoughts were well-organized.
However, those "good" students wrote boring essays. They all sounded the same.
After leaving college admissions, I began The EssayLady (www.essaylady.com) and worked as a professional editor and writing coach. Over the years, I've shown hundreds of students how to write college application essays that stand out from the crowd. I've helped students gain acceptance to: Harvard, Columbia, Princeton, Cornell, The University of Pennsylvania, Wellesley College, Boston College, Johns Hopkins University, Yale, Notre Dame, Duke, Cal Tech, The Ohio State University, Georgia Tech, The University of Miami, The University of Florida, George Washington University, and dozens of other top-ranked public and private universities.
But I've realized that not everyone can pay hundreds of dollars for a private essay review.
I decided to write a book with insider's tips and sample essays at a fraction of the cost of a private essay review.
I wrote this book with "good" students in mind.
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| Why your English teacher, guidance counselor, and parents are not good admissions essay reviewers | |
| What admission officers are really looking for | |
| Common mistakes and pitfalls to avoid | |
| The two most important sentences in your essay | |
| How to interview yourself to find the best material | |
| Creative approaches that REALLY worked | |
| How to read your work like an editing pro |
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