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Everything you need to know about writing a compelling college essay from a former admissions officer...

As an admissions officer at a top-tier state university, I read thousands of essays from brilliant students. What did I find? Those straight-A, National Merit scholar students did not know how to write compelling application essays. Sure, they could write a paragraph. Their thoughts were well-organized.

However, those "good" students wrote boring essays. They all sounded the same.

After leaving college admissions, I began The EssayLady (www.essaylady.com) and worked as a professional editor and writing coach. Over the years, I've shown hundreds of students how to write college application essays that stand out from the crowd. I've helped students gain acceptance to: Harvard, Columbia, Princeton, Cornell, The University of Pennsylvania, Wellesley College, Boston College, Johns Hopkins University, Yale, Notre Dame, Duke, Cal Tech, The Ohio State University, Georgia Tech, The University of Miami, The University of Florida, George Washington University, and dozens of other top-ranked public and private universities.

But I've realized that not everyone can pay hundreds of dollars for a private essay review.

I decided to write a book with insider's tips and sample essays at a fraction of the cost of a private essay review.

I wrote this book with "good" students in mind.

The EssayLady's Guide to Great College Essays contains the tips your English teacher and guidance counselor can't tell you about, because they've never been on an admissions committee.

Over 35 Sample "Before" and "After" essays from REAL students
Why your English teacher, guidance counselor, and parents are not good admissions essay reviewers
What admission officers are really looking for
Common mistakes and pitfalls to avoid
The two most important sentences in your essay
How to interview yourself to find the best material
Creative approaches that REALLY worked
How to read your work like an editing pro

You already know that a great deal is riding on these essays. This could mean the difference between getting into your first-choice school, or not, winning thousands of dollars in scholarship money, or going empty-handed. You need an essay that's GREAT. Don't leave the process to chance! Get your copy of The EssayLady's Guide to Great College Essays today!

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What Students Are Saying...


Heather's advice made the difference when I applied to MBA schools. I was accepted into 4 top tier schools and attended the school of my choice. I highly recommend this book!
- Jeremy Reis
I thought I would send a quick note to tell you that I have been recently admitted to Harvard University Class of 2016!! Thank you so much for all of your help during my essay writing/editing process -- your expertise were so helpful and I strongly believe that my essays were terrific because of your assistance, and were a huge reason for my acceptance.
Thanks again!

- Jake Levin
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